One typo, and another that may have some redudancy...
<A s'sugi malchata plunges one of its clawed hands into the sand, clucking and chattering wildly. The sand about 's feet begins to swirl until it rises up around I, but G scrambles away before it can take hold!
<A s'sugi malchata gestures at you.
A tiny ball of flame flies at you!
Your ethereal shield crackles with energy!
The fire ball glances off your battle shield as it passes. Firekast's skin burns slightly as the intense heat of the fireball washes over it!
The heat of the fireball washes over you, slightly burning your skin!
Not sure if it needs to say "Firekast's skin blah blah blah..." as well as the following line about it washing over me. Like seeing it from first and third person view.