You are Lord of Lyrics Leilond Sootherin, an Elf.
You have pointed ears and thick-lashed stormy grey eyes. Your deep purple hair is long and fine, and is worn loose. You have fair skin and a brawny build.
You are a bit over average height for a Elf.
You have a tattoo of a darkened shadowy dragon that appears to be burned into the skin on your back.

You have faint scuffing to the left arm, faint scuffing to the left leg.
You are in good shape.

You are wearing a tattered and torn wrapped cloak of burgundy nightsilk, a duffel bag, a polished leather morawen with a katar and a katar secured to it, a scrimshaw banded backtube, a half-length charcoal grey vest, a chain lorica, some soft tan leather armbands, a secure brace buckler, a carved pick, a scarred leather craftsman's belt, a low-slung belt with studded steel panels, some loose burgundy nightsilk breeches, some light tan legwraps, a wrapped thigh sheath and some tall hiking boots with steel reinforcements.


The buckler is all that I have left to alter, and it would idealy look like the above bolded text provided that the alterers agree to it. In your opinion, does the theme work? Is the description short enough? Anything that you personally would change? Suggestions? Or am I finally good to go?

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~Leilond, the one who is backtraining yet again and who is obsessed with power.
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