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G'day,
Just wanted to share my latest non-DR work. Feedback is always welcome.
http://webpages.charter.net/photomanip/Assets/Wonder%20Woman%20Gallery/images/Vacation_jpg.jpg
For those who haven't looked, there is more stuff to see in my gallery. Just follow the link at the bottom of the post.
Regards,
Godrich de'Finchal
"You are like a mouse arguing with an owl. You think the owl is wrong, he thinks you are dinner."
http://webpages.charter.net/plblack/Galleries.html
G'day,
Hmm, assuming you mean the more white showing on the right eye than the left (as we see them), now I need to go back to my original headshot to see if that is the way they are or something that crept in during the manipulations. <mutters>
Thanks for the feedback.
Godrich de'Finchal
"You are like a mouse arguing with an owl. You think the owl is wrong, he thinks you are dinner."
http://webpages.charter.net/plblack/Galleries.html
Hmm, assuming you mean the more white showing on the right eye than the left (as we see them), now I need to go back to my original headshot to see if that is the way they are or something that crept in during the manipulations. <mutters>
Thanks for the feedback.
Godrich de'Finchal
"You are like a mouse arguing with an owl. You think the owl is wrong, he thinks you are dinner."
http://webpages.charter.net/plblack/Galleries.html
Another thumbs up with nits :)
Her breasts look asymetrical. I know the perspective messes with it, but the left (her left) seems to move the fabric out more. It's like her left side is...Um...How to explain this...Like her left shoulder is facing away from you, but her right shoulder is square to you. I'm not entirely sure I'm getting my point across, and I have no talent to draw what I mean.
Also, her right foot's toes look wrong. Particularly compared to the left foot, which looks very lifelike. The right looks too square and two-dimensional.
That said...It's very nice. I wish I had that kind of talent.
Her breasts look asymetrical. I know the perspective messes with it, but the left (her left) seems to move the fabric out more. It's like her left side is...Um...How to explain this...Like her left shoulder is facing away from you, but her right shoulder is square to you. I'm not entirely sure I'm getting my point across, and I have no talent to draw what I mean.
Also, her right foot's toes look wrong. Particularly compared to the left foot, which looks very lifelike. The right looks too square and two-dimensional.
That said...It's very nice. I wish I had that kind of talent.
G'day,
I understand what you are saying about the breasts. I probably need to tone down the highlight on that side which is what, I think, is causing the apparent difference. On the foot thing, I think that is due more to the perspective and the fact that the toes are sunk down in the carpet some, which would give a more straight line along that edge than otherwise.
Thanks for the feedback.
Godrich de'Finchal
"You are like a mouse arguing with an owl. You think the owl is wrong, he thinks you are dinner."
http://webpages.charter.net/plblack/Galleries.html
I understand what you are saying about the breasts. I probably need to tone down the highlight on that side which is what, I think, is causing the apparent difference. On the foot thing, I think that is due more to the perspective and the fact that the toes are sunk down in the carpet some, which would give a more straight line along that edge than otherwise.
Thanks for the feedback.
Godrich de'Finchal
"You are like a mouse arguing with an owl. You think the owl is wrong, he thinks you are dinner."
http://webpages.charter.net/plblack/Galleries.html
G'day,
<kicks that extra 'l' off the end of the gallery link>
Should work now I think.
Regards,
Godrich de'Finchal
"You are like a mouse arguing with an owl. You think the owl is wrong, he thinks you are dinner."
http://webpages.charter.net/plblack/Galleries.htm
<kicks that extra 'l' off the end of the gallery link>
Should work now I think.
Regards,
Godrich de'Finchal
"You are like a mouse arguing with an owl. You think the owl is wrong, he thinks you are dinner."
http://webpages.charter.net/plblack/Galleries.htm
