I noticed a few things. First:

>"You should also know that your instrument is your life, in many ways. It will be the vessel for your magic for some songs. I recommend that you learn the stringed instrument skill for now, since many songs shall depend upon it."

That might need to be updated.


Second, he started with 0 parry, which means he doesn't qualify for first circle.

Third, Silvyr should probably mention that she'll teach Care for free. Newbs who don't know to grab it will have a harder time getting their first few circles (although it would still be doable without classes).