You grab the wooden caddy firmly by the sides and hoist it over high your head. Eyes narrowed in determination, you slam the wooden caddy down with all your strength as you drive your knee up to meet it. The strike is perfect, the box shattering into countless pieces under the force of the impact. With a disdainful glance at the splinted remains, you dust the few stray pieces of wood from your knee and hands.
Should look more like You grab the wooden caddy firmly by the sides and hoist it HIGH OVER YOUR HEAD. Eyes narrowed in determination, you slam the wooden caddy down with all your strength as you drive your knee up to meet it. The strike is perfect, the box shattering into countless pieces under the force of the impact. With a disdainful glance at the SPLINTERED remains, you dust the few stray pieces of wood from your knee and hands.
~Terc~
"Look at the bright side. It could have been Tercsyn instead of Drongol." - Solomon
"The best argument against democracy is a five-minute conversation with the average voter. " - Sir Winston Churchill
Typos with Dismantle still not fixed on 09/20/2006 01:36 PM CDT
Re: Typos with Dismantle still not fixed on 09/20/2006 01:40 PM CDT
Same with the metal version..
You study the iron casket grimly, looking for a weakness in the metal construction. Satisfied, you grab the it firmly by the sides and hoist it over high your head. Eyes narrowed in determination, you slam the iron casket down with all your strength as you drive your knee up to meet it. The strike is perfect, the metal folding under the force of the impact. With a disdainful glance at the twisted heap, you casually toss it aside.
You study the iron casket grimly, looking for a weakness in the metal construction. Satisfied, you grab the it firmly by the sides and hoist it HIGH OVER YOUR HEAD. Eyes narrowed in determination, you slam the iron casket down with all your strength as you drive your knee up to meet it. The strike is perfect, the metal folding under the force of the impact. With a disdainful glance at the twisted heap, you casually toss it aside.
"Look at the bright side. It could have been Tercsyn instead of Drongol." - Solomon
"The best argument against democracy is a five-minute conversation with the average voter. " - Sir Winston Churchill
You study the iron casket grimly, looking for a weakness in the metal construction. Satisfied, you grab the it firmly by the sides and hoist it over high your head. Eyes narrowed in determination, you slam the iron casket down with all your strength as you drive your knee up to meet it. The strike is perfect, the metal folding under the force of the impact. With a disdainful glance at the twisted heap, you casually toss it aside.
You study the iron casket grimly, looking for a weakness in the metal construction. Satisfied, you grab the it firmly by the sides and hoist it HIGH OVER YOUR HEAD. Eyes narrowed in determination, you slam the iron casket down with all your strength as you drive your knee up to meet it. The strike is perfect, the metal folding under the force of the impact. With a disdainful glance at the twisted heap, you casually toss it aside.
"Look at the bright side. It could have been Tercsyn instead of Drongol." - Solomon
"The best argument against democracy is a five-minute conversation with the average voter. " - Sir Winston Churchill
Re: Typos with Dismantle still not fixed on 10/13/2006 09:31 PM CDT